project 3

Journal #9

1.world those not matter.

2. World those not matter, because humans and accessories are the ones that count.

3.Humans and accessories are the ones that counts,because we can adapt to what the world has to give.

1.Men are obsess with their bodies.

2.Men are obsess with their bodies, because of media

3. Men are obsess with their body because,they're missing self steam, and are afraid of rejection.

Chapter 11 -2

"Evolution as fact or theory"

1. Transitions:

• "fossils that are not common, and shouldn't be. but not because of our understanding of evolution."
• "the etymology of september, october, november, december ( seven, eight,ninth, and tenth, we know that two aditionals must be added to an original calander of ten months."
• "perfection covers the tracks of past history, and past history the evidence of descent- is our mark of evolution, evolution. lies exposed in the imperfections that record a hitory of descent
• Paragraph 17.

2. Inferences:

• Paragraph 17 (humans)
• paragraph 16 (months)

3. i really dont have idea of this date, but i can tell that he's showing something that is really important for him and for the person that he was in this part of history.

Chapter 11

Is the earth round or flat?

Question of active reading.

1.I would say it does! it has questions of interpretation,analysis and evaluates; this are really important things that this text has and i would say that its good that it has them because this is a type of text that needs all this type of information and it needs an argument and prove.
This text has as well syntactic meaning because of the content,description and connections.
2.I think they would, and i would say that they want the audience to know that he's a scientist because it makes it see like he knows what he's talking about, and i think if it was somebody else that we knew that it was not a scientist we probably take the text or article like just a reading and it wouldn't be taking serious.
3.

• Paragraph 10: "i suspect that they're quite of few items you take on faith,even important thing you could verify without much trouble"
• Paragraph 5: "with little scrabbling on a piece of paper you an see that those observations imply around earth."
• Paragraph 7: " there is no question that many people believe the earth was round, i wonder how many knew this"

In the ones i picked he's tone is kind of sarcastic and no serious at all .and sometimes when you read this it makes you think that the way he says the stuff is an a tone that shows that he is jealous or has envy or what others did and he didn't

Journal 8-9

Image 1

a) Less food in our plates.
b) Less food because we want to be skinny

c)Skinny because what media shows

Image 2

a) people burns money
b) people burns money because they have to smoke
c) People burn money because they think they need to smoke.

In The News # 7

Kids have a voice!
Children have the right to know what it's going on around the world and the really feel what's better for us, now days we have to see that the kids are the ones who are going to be our future! so i think is perfect to let the kids have a foice and participate in something that may really dont have a influence but still is something that encorege them to vote and pick the best for them.
No matter what age do you have, i always said that children know best. they have this weird sence that they know always waht are they talking about, but sometimes are parents the ones who guide them on how to do and how to do it, but i still think that is good that parents are showing the kids how does it feel to be an adult or at list do something that they do.
I say that accurate can be anything, why is different of what an adult has to say that an a kid has to say?? we are all humans and we have the right to pick what we want so why do we have to say no to kids?!

chapter 6

The maker’s eye: revising your own manuscripts.
George Orwell


1. How would you revise the essay?

· I revise my project number 1. Putting more information like why do I believe in it, why people believe in this, and how did it happen, how does this believe develop in life’s, what type of impact does it have, and what is the important thing about it. In audience, I make sure that the essay is clear and concise with the ideas and that it may be a topic that the reader would feel familiar with. Structure is the most important part in the essay, because everything has to go in the right place, at the right time, and with the right words. The development is kind of open and just gives you the idea straight up. And the voice is trying to open the eyes and give the reader an idea of what they have to be concern and open mind it about.

2. Reread:

· When I reread my essay I found some mistakes in the punctuation that when they weren’t there the text was kind of confusing.

3. Quotes:

· Yes it does. It makes me think that the person is actually talking and expressing himself in the text. And it’s helpful to understand the examples that are being expose in the text.
I think quotes are one of the important things in a text, because when you have quotes you give life to the text, you show that someone is with you, or helps to express the moment more clearly.

journal #7

Journal #7
George Orwell, "Politics and the English Language," (excerpt)
· He says that thoughts are foolish and people sometimes has foolish thoughts, people tries to imitate others and sometimes those things are big mistakes.
He puts two examples of bad writing which had a lot to do with the bad use of English, people never finish to write their thoughts, or they just write stuff not thinking the fact, that what is written has to make s sense.

· No. I think English still the same thing or probably worst. Now days people use English in short sentences (slang) like: cuz: because, gonna: going to, and like he was saying this type of things still around because of imitation.

· For now days he’s rules or tips are not going to be to helpful, but I know that, they are good rules that we have to keep in mind all the time when we are writing.
probably number 3 can help, because sometimes people and even me, put words In the text that they’re really more that what you need to explain the thought.

· I think he’s trying to put the sensation and the picture as the biggest thought that are not organize and he wants to re-organize them like that they can be a sensation when you put them in a picture or let’s say the paper in this case

Questions.

1. Why do you believe that things happen for a reason?
2. Do you agree with the things that I expose in my essay?
3. What would you like to change or add in to my essay?
4. What is your oppinion towards the essay?

In the News # 7

It was probably intentional, but you can never know what's going in this guys mind while they did this act, it may probably be a racis thing but really you dont have to use a force in someone if you know you can control the situation just by talking or just trying another way besides for being agressive, but if you act in a supid way like they did just for jump in some one i think that's not right and i think they aren't right for give them prouds for what they did they should do something about it and dont let it go like that. i think it's right that he had been suspended, because his confesion says everything. we have to be careful on what we believe and in the things that we hear, because sometimes they're not true and they are only trying to get us to beliebe and they try to give us what do we want to hear.

Active Reading 2

"How Friendship Was Feminized".

1. What is similar?

• Travis says that male friendship is known as superficial and Choen says that men does not have firends, they talk but it's not as deep as a female relationship. females are sensitive and males are shy and quite, the essays are different in they way that Travis think that males have this thing for groups females are more like alone and be only with one person and choen its more just explaining that male are more personal. another different thing is that Travis try to show the difference by psychology.

2. Define friendship:

• male: they hide their feelings, like to be alone, always try to look like the men! in the house, they want to show ruff,they dont believe in friendship but that does not mean that they dont have some one to talk
• female: They like to talk,they're not afraid, they like to be with some one around, they're really open and they like to sahre everything with others.
• friendship for them is something really important on females but in men they dont think it's to important.
• for me friendship is that some one that you enjoy to be with that some one that you pick to talk and give everything that you feel.

3.Mature or immature?

• mature of a women think that be sensitive and expresive its fine but you actually have to know what is the behave of the other person to know if they are mature or not.i think she is just trying to but male in a bad position because i dont think that you can say that some one is immature just because they dont want to have a friendship.

Active reading.

Men and Their Hidden Feelings.

Active reading:

1. Friendship?

• The properties are like a person to talk to but it's not call a friend, maybe a pal,Buddie, but not a real friend. he does not think men can have a real friendship or call what they have friendship, they don't talk like woman do they don't confess their feeling like women do, men likes to keep their feeling to their selves that's why they don't talk to much with their pals.

2. Classification?

• women will tell you everything it a second how they feel, how they do, everything they can, but men are more quite, they talk in silence, their are known as people that hide their feelings and i do agree with him, women are open and men are more into their world.

3. Human behavior?

• i don't think it would be stronger i think it's enough with the things that we know, he gives the information that we need to understand, he is not generalizing i think it's just an opinion and i do think he is right. men are suppose to be the men!! their are not suppose to show their feelings and they always try to hide everything and they don't want no one to have a question about their sexuality.

Journal 6

Journal # 6

“Things happen for a reason”

1. Esmeralda 39:

World: because it’s not for you, it’s not mean to be.
God: He has something better for you, everything it’s suppose to be in Gods time, so if it’s not the right time, he would take it a way, giving you a lesson and a new to thing to keep moving.

2. Alex 10: this is true because it’s part of live; this makes things easier, and everything its better.

3. Alan 6: Because if they didn’t happen everything would be bad.

4. Alan 45: It’s live; I can call it like the rode of live.

5. Luke 26: Because is like if we make a mistake, this is like the second chance, like that you can try it again and do not make the same mistake over and over.

6. Cassandra 27: You do things in your live, letting your feelings and your heart do it for you, and some times does things are not right and you do them for a reason, everything you do in live is for a reason, it can be bad or good but still a reason. For everything you do you learn something its kind of like a lesson, like that next time you know what did you do wrong at first and the next you’ll try to don’t do it again.

7. Carolina 19: I do believe that things happen for a reason, you may not know what the reason is but it still happen, it can be something you did something you didn’t do but still it’s a reason for everything that happens around us.

As we can see, most of the answers were a lesson for live, for a change for something new and a new opportunity. So I can say that yes, things happen for a reason.