1. Why do you believe that things happen for a reason?
2. Do you agree with the things that I expose in my essay?
3. What would you like to change or add in to my essay?
4. What is your oppinion towards the essay?
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3 comments:
yes things do happen for a reason it is all connected one thing happens so another can also happen because of the first thing. The essay is what i would say to be very confirming. all the people had their oppinion. i really liked how you asked different aged people. that made it better to me because then it was like a cross examination. i would maybe add more of what you believe rather then just others veiws on it.
good essay
1. I believe things happen for a reason because they were meant to be. If it wasn't meant to be it would never have happened.
2. Yes, you mostly talked about love. I think thats what everyone thinks of when they think of everything happening for a reason. If a couple breaks up, someone always manages to say, "everything happens for a reason" and I believe it does because they will meet someone new and perhaps spend the rest of their life with that person.
3. If I could add anything to your essay I would add more ideas to why everything happens for a reason, such as becoming sick. Someone might get sick, there life may be on the line, and they discover themselves and find out they are not living their life the way they would want if they were to die tomorrow. Maybe talk about a little more than just love.
4. I liked it,because I do believe everything happens for a reason. It was very well written.
In my personal opinion all that happen in our world and in our lifes ,no matter if is good or bad , have a purpose, so everything happen for a reason .In life everybody learn of their misteakes and errors . Sometimes when something terrible happen we feel so bad like when somebody in your family died , really that is nothing that can have a good purpose but when the time pass and you reflect about this and you see what happen as a consequence of this and these were beautiful , you will see that life demonstrated you that everything happpen for a reason .
I think this is a good essay with a good topic , but i would like that you express more your personal opinion and reflect more examples of your life had demondtrated you that this myth is true and in this way when sombody that doesn't believe in this myth and read your essay will be convinced that everything happen for a reason .
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